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Panel 1: Establishing shot. Night, side street, poorly dressed young man interacting with an old computer terminal embedded into the brick of a building, backpack at his feet.
Young man: Come on, come on.
Panel 2: Interior of a car, someone with a laptop on their lap, glow picking up a tie.
1 Word balloon: We've got him.
2 Word balloon: He's acting sloppy.
1 Word balloon: He's been on the move for three days.
Panel 3: Young man running away from terminal, backpack remains.
Dialogue box: He's been on the move longer than that.
Panel 4: Grainy image of young man, curved corners in this panel, this is an image taken from the terminal's recording feed.
2 Word balloon: Is that...?
1 Yes. He looks sick.
2 Will that give us a heat signature?
1 No, it's video only, no audio either.
Panel 5: Trench coat man leaning down at the bag left behind.
Radio box: Topper, bio the site anyways.
Topper: Already on it, looks like he left a bag here, too.
Radio box: Don't open it.
Topper: Thanks, Dad. That was a close one.
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